We all have favorite activities that we enjoy. Write at least a 12 sentence paragraph persuading readers to try the activity that you enjoy most! Remember, avoid personal pronouns such as “I” and “you”. Please use one set each of dual adjectives and dual verbs.
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How do people get on TV? Actors must have started their training from somewhere. Most likely they took a drama class just like mine at Monte Vista Christian School. You should take a drama class for 3 reasons. First, if you take drama you can act and sing on the stage. Secondly, drama is really fun because
you get to pretend to be someone you are not. If you become a good actor you can be on TV or on a Broadway Show. If you become lucky enough you can become famous and travel around the world. It is an awesome thing to do which would bring a lot of joy and fun to the actor. Once you’re on that stage everybody is looking at you all the pressure is on you. No matter what you do they will still love what you do. When the actor is done performing people will bring the actor flowers or possibly an award for their achievements. That is why drama in my opinion is the best thing to take in your whole life.
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Video games are so fun. They are fun for everyone no matter what age. There are many kinds of games to play. Some examples are sports games, race games and card games. Multiple people can play video games. That includes friends and family that live across town. Part of the fun is to try to get good at a game and then beat the game. Some people even like doing videos about the games people play. They can get very popular on YouTube. Another good thing about video games is that people can play video games anytime of the day. So people sometimes play when they cannot sleep. People should try video games out, I’ll bet they’ll be stoaked.
Correction: Video games are so fun. They are fun for everyone no matter what age. There are many kinds of games to play. Some examples are sports games, racing games, and card games. Multiple people can play video games at the same time. That includes friends and family that live across town. Part of the fun is to try to get good at a game and then beat it. Some people even like doing videos about the games people play. They can get very popular on YouTube. Another good thing about video games is that people can play video games anytime of the day. So people sometimes play video games when they cannot sleep. People should try video games out, I’ll bet they’ll be stoaked.
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Go climb a tree then too.
Equestrian. 1) Equestrian is most exciting. 2) horseback riding is a great sport to learn. 3) The history of horseback riding came about around 4200bc. 4) People may say boys don’t normally ride horses, then who would be doing all the horse races, who started it all. MEN! 5)It’s not for most people but when with a horse it feels like a dream where people can escape reality. 6) it takes concentration, strength, and control. 7) To ride a horse is one thing but to bond with it is another. 8) Equestrian takes a lot of work, it’s not just like any other sport. 9) Pretend the horse is your pet, clean it, feed it, take care of it, basically bonding with the horse. 10) The horse would recognize the person and understand how to work with you. 11) horsemanship is a sport that takes time and practice but in the end it’s worth all the dedication. 12) Equestrian is probably one of the best sports because it involves an animal, a good workout, different tricks, and it’s beautiful to watch.
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What an amazing paragraph!😉
Tired of searching for an activity to do? Play Soccer! Soccer is awesome and exciting. Soccer helps players learn to communicate and collaborate. Soccer is more exciting than baseball. There is a lot more action in soccer compared to baseball. In baseball, the pitcher throws the ball and if it isn’t hit, players have wait for the catcher to throw the ball. In soccer, players don’t have to wait for the ball to be thrown and caught. There is constant movement everywhere on the field. Also, in baseball, players have limited time to be on offense because players only have three strikes before they are out. Players are lucky to receive 7 pitches. If players are out, players have to wait for the whole line up before it is their turn again to bat. In soccer, players are always playing and they can change from offense to defense in a blink of an eye.
In Soccer, there are many positions to play and each position has its own job so players learn to communicate and work with each other. If someone likes to play offense, play soccer and be a forward. If someone likes to play block shots, play soccer and be a goalie. If someone likes to run and bump other players, play soccer and be a mid-fielder. If someone likes to help defend, play soccer and be a defender. In soccer, players still have to communicate with their team mates.
Start playing soccer now!
Great job! Good point on baseball.
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Animals feel the same as humans do. Many people use animals as accessories, or reasons to show off. Having a pet is a responciblity that many people don’t understand! Many of those people would rather be on a video game, or at the mall than to be outside in nature. What those people dont understand is that, everytime you are with a pet you have a chance to bond with a real living being! No matter what, a pet will always be there for their masters. Though it may seem hard to believe, there is always going to be animals. Exceptionally since humans are animals too. So really, even though many people think humans are the higher species we are all equals.
I know right
Video games are a lot fo fun. Video games can be fun for everyone who plays them old or young. There are tons and tons of video games in the world for people to play. There’s action games, adventure games, simulator games, strategy games and even learning games. There are also game where you can play with other people around the world or in your country. Some people say you can’t bond with others while playing video games, but you can buy a voice chat headset. In some games you can create your own world. Some games even teach you how to do things like hunting. Some games you can prank your friends with like The Scary Maze game. Video games are very fun. I think everyone should try playing one.
I think you meant of, not “fo”.
Basketball is my favorite activity. It is great sport for anyone to play. The rules are simple, but it takes basketball players along time to master them. The more basketball players practice the better they come. The only problem is if a basketball player trainers them self the wrong way it is hard to switch their habits. Many people don’t know, but basketball is fourth most popular sports in the world and third most popular sport in the United States of America. Other countries can play differently than each other. For example in Australian basket ball you can’t dibble or walk with the ball, you can only pass. In Asian basketball it moves a lot slower since there is no time limit with the ball. Mostly people play for money such as the ACC, PAC Ten, Big East, and NBA. Other people play to be the best like Street Basketball and King of The Court. But the reason that most people play enjoy basketball is to have fun!
Making crafts is so fun! Crafting is a great activity to take part in because it is a great way to show your creativity. It’s really easy and fun anyone can take part in it. Some crafts are more challenging but if you keep working at it your piece will end up looking amazing. A craft can be anything from a wallet made of blue and green duct tape to a valentines day card made from construction paper and glue. No matter what one makes they can always have a good time. Crafting takes creativity and a sense of imagination. Now many people may rely on the instructions but just know not to be afraid to change it up and put your own twist on whatever your making. You never know you may find out something new. When crafting you can experiment with new and exciting materials and ideas. Isn’t that great? So what are you waiting for grab some glitter glue and get started!
Legend of Zelda is the best! Legend of Zelda provides the skills to finish puzzles. Those skills help your brain develop. Zelda also has the comforting of a amazing adventre video game feeling. Legend of Zelda is a video game and fun and smart puzzles. Video games are known for “mushing your brains” whitch might be bad. Although this game can help you figure out puzzles and might mush your brain.
Josh, your post was great, however, you spelled adventure wrong. You also said it can help figure out puzzles and it might mush your brain instead of it might help you figure out puzzles but it might mush your brain
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Art is amazing. It is so much fun. Art is amazing because it feels like your hand has a mind of it own. When you start drawing a picture pops in your head and your hand takes off. Art makes you feel like you can create a masterpiece. When you do art it makes you feel like you are were you are creating. Art can help the person calm down and relax. Over all art is a fascinating the that has been going on for years. Everybody can do art if you believe you can. Go out in the world and create your masterpiece.
Great job but you should try to use less yous and personnel pronouns for example, you can use: people, students, children, humans. Check sentence eight. You will find some errors in that sentence.
I love running. Running is really fun. Sometimes I run outside. It is nice to be able to run free outside, in the sun. Some people can’t run because they have disabilities. Some of us can. Use your gift. If you don’t, you might as well not have it. If you like to get active, running is the thing for you. It’s amazing you can run all day. You can run anywhere. Except the ocean. Try it.
My favorite activity is soccer because people get to be goalies, defenders, midfielders, and forward. All of those positions one can not use their hands but only the goalie can. Soccer makes people’s minds work to find the ball and makes people’s body’s work to get the ball. Many people make a living of playing soccer. If u are very good at soccer one may become a professional player and many teams may want them to be on their team. At some soccer games for professionals each person that goes makes a soccer player get more money. Many people make a living off of soccer because it pays very well if you are a professional.
Skateboarding is so fun! It helps kids get outside to hang out with friends. (But done skate inside). Other then being on electronics all day. Skateboarding has been around for a while. They have now made skateparks so that kids can go and skate over there while having fun! Just go out and skate for a while and you’ll get the hang of it! If you’re still haveing trouble, then sign up for a coach. In about a week you’ll be a normal skater in no time! You can also ask a friend to teach you. Hey it doesn’t cost money. But don’t go diving and and try some tricks. First ride around with it until you feel comfortable to try some tricks. Go on, give it a shot!
Hey Jackson good job. I thing you meant don’t not done inside. Also, instead of other then, I think you should put rather then. Finally, try not to start a sentence with but. Overall, great job.
Flag Football is a fun and exiting sport for all gender and ages. There is no contact and it is a safe activity for kids and adults. There are minor requirements, all you need is a flag belt, athletic shorts, cleats and a mouth guard. There are many leagues in California and I bet there eave none near you. Flag Football does not require a certain skill set. If you don’t want to join a league you can just gets some friends and start a game. Any size field will work, http://flagflagfootball.com is a great website to learn all the rules of this awsome sport.
Diving in my prospective is totally amazing. First, diving is the best thing other than going to the aquarium. Diving is when you can get up close and personal with all sorts of sea life depending on what seas you diving in. Sure a big tank on your back is heavy but when your in the water it is light as a feather. Next, diving might take a lot of work you know with the studying and exams but it really isn’t that bad because if you were to go on a dive with know knowledge, it’s basically committing suicide. Last, diving is a great experience in general. It is a way to just have fun under water without going up and down to take a breaths. So clearly, diving is better than any other underwater stuff like snorkeling.
Warhammer 40,000 and all modelling/model board games are great. They allow people to express their creativity. Some allow people to paint the models any way you want while others allow you to put the pieces together any way builders want. Some allow people to do both. Warhammer 40,000 is a great game with excellent characters and an excellent story. All of the characters are well thought out and they look awesome. Warhammer 40,000 is a modelling game where players put the characters together and paint them and BOOM! You’ve got your army. There are about seven armies to choose from and they are all epic. When someone finishes their army, then the fun starts. Players battle each other for dominance of the battlefield. People can do this anywhere they have a flat surface and a light. Personally, I really enjoy it. Everyone should try model making at least once.
This was written by J.P. Scott.
Football is the best sport. I love football because it allows people to do everything. Running, catching and throwing. It can also help you lose weight. It can get you out of the house and doing something for you’re health. You also have to have good body structure. There can be some negatives about football. One is that, it can be dangerous at times. You could get pounded like a pancake. I would say to that is, wear all of the equipment or if you fell uncomfortable play flag football
Really loved it! I just might play football!
Hunting is a great sport. It all started when I was just a little kid. I was about five. My moms side of the family are hunters and one of my uncles loved to hunt and he walked in the house with a hog. I was so amazed and I wanted to help so bad but he reapplied with, “you can wipe the blood of the truck outside.” But I will stop there hunting is a great sport besides wiping blood off a dirty discussing truck. But when you go hunting you get to see butiful sites and you get to carry around a big gun and that pretty cool and you get chewy jucy meat. People should hunt because it is a great sport.
Soccer is the best! You get to play games and you even get to play games and go against different teams that you never have heard about. Another great thing about soccer is that you get play with friends and people girls/boys you have never played with. Soccer is way better than softball, swimming, and way more things. When you play soccer people have the time to run around but if they play softball and all the others they don’t let people play different positions and different things on the field. Another thing is that some of the other sports are so boring that you might not even want to go anymore. Soccer is really fun to watch. When people go to soccer games they will will be all into the game! Soccer is the sport that everyone will want to play if they just watch a game! Finally soccer is a sport that everyone will want to play! When you play soccer for the first time don’t worry about getting hurt you will be fine. Now that I told you that soccer is the best thing in the world.
My favorite activity is theatre. I do theatre at All About Theatre, also known as AAT in Santa Cruz. AAT is a great place were all ages can participate and, or watch theatre. In the beginning when you sign up there is a month or less audition so the actor will know what part you will get in the Musical. Once the actor has gotten there part they will practice for about a month to four months with the other actor in the play. There is also other places you can do theatre. Like school and other places in your community. There is theatre everywhere nomatter where you live. Overall, theatre is a really good activity to do.
Soccer is a super great and fun sport. Soccer is a great sport to learn responsibility, strategy, perserverance, and teamwork. The responsibility I plays a huge role. A soccer players team must be able to count on their teammate to show up to practice and games. Strategy is also important because a player must know when to pass, dribble, or shoot. Perserverance might be the most important. A soccer player can never give up even if they are tired, hurt, or just down a goal. They must persevere. Lastly is teamwork. Teamwork is a hard skill to learn. People must learn to trust their teammates and know their strengths and weaknesses. Soccer is a great sport to learn life skills, and it is fun too!
Skiing is a fun sport. Skiing is very athletic. Skiing is exciting because people can go down the mountain as slow or fast as they want. The sport helps adults and kids bond and enjoy family time. Skiers are able to travel to all over the world for amazing skiing. Skiing allows leg muscles get stronger. In addtion, skiing is a good sport to do.
Horses are fun to jump and ride! Some may even say it is amazing and incredible. It can be a total stress reliever and even take ones mind of of something important coming up. I thing horsemanship is something lots of people love and you will too!
Running around on a dirt field with a paintball gun shooting my friends with little tiny paintballs is my favorite way of spending my free time. Paintball is the best game to play with friends and family. The excitement of having help from your teammates while attacking the enemy team is just awesome! During a day of paintball, a person needs gear in order to play. The gear includes a mask, padding, a gun, paintballs, and some old clothes (that way nicer clothes don’t get dirty). In a game, the referee will take votes from people for game modes. The most common mode is team deathmatch. This mode is a team versus team game where you only have one life. This means that if you get shot once, you’re out. Once the game starts, everyone is running for their lives! When they run, they start getting exercise. That way they don’t have to go to the gym! When the game ends, everyone leaves and goes home or stays and starts playing another game. In conclusion, paintball is great game to play on your free time.