We all have favorite activities that we enjoy. Write at least a 12 sentence paragraph persuading readers to try the activity that you enjoy most! Remember, avoid personal pronouns such as “I” and “you”. Please use one set each of dual adjectives and dual verbs.
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Hunting so fun. People who hunt once want to keep on hunting. Hunting is only not fun for those who don’t like blood. When you see an animal, aim and shoot. BOOM! If the shot is accurate, the animal is dead. Some say that hunting is dangerous and cruel. However, good hunters know how to not get people and tags keep hunters from shooting more then enough. Hunting is good for those who don’t mind dead bloody animals. The fun part is cleaning the animal. It is fun to take feathers of a pheasant. Try hunting just once and you will love it. To try new things is good so just try it. You will have a blast.
Hey Alexa I think that you should have put, instead of “Hunting so fun.” How about ,” Hunting is so much fun.”
Nice I like the details!
You forgot to put an is between hunting and so. You also misused of in the 10th sentence. It should have been off. I also think that you used too many “you”s.
Soccer is a great sport. Some soccer player’s are really good. But, to become a good soccer player, soccer players must practice and work hard on getting better at it. The two main concepts of soccer are running and kicking. This sport may also seem like a challenging and brutal sport. But this sport is fun and also exciting. Some more things that people may use in soccer is passing, dribling, and a lot more things. One thing that most people like about soccer is kicking the soccer ball into the net. There is some fun ways that soccer player’s kick the ball into the net. A couple of the ways are curving the ball into the net or even power kicking the ball. Soccer is a very fun sport. Someday this sport will be well known all over the world.
Baseball is great. It’s fun because peoplecan play with pretty much anybody, any amount of people. Some people say baseball is dangerous because kids can get hit and injured. However, people wear a helmet, knee pads, or whatever to avoid getting hurt. Also, coaches teach kids the proper technique to duck a ball. Even if the ball does hit someone it doesn’t hurt that bad and the chance that it will injure them is very slim
I like how you said how Injurys are slim but, the only thing is that you forgot to put a space between people and can.
Nice!!
Seems like a lot of fun and it is already known all over the world
Dance is an amazing art. It has so many different types you can choose from. Whether it’s tap, jazz, ballet, lyrical, flamenco, salsa and so many more! The dance teachers always make it fun. So why not join a class? Boys and girls can both do Hip Hop. If you take dance class, once a year they do a recital, where you could wear really cute costumes and outfits. If you dance for five, ten, or twenty years you could get a trophy. If you really like it, and you have great talent, you could join competition teams. There you can compete against other brilliant studios. If you have a school talent show, you can show your school the gifts you have. Dance makes people feel happy and content.
Nice paragraph!
Great job Sofia. Next time, watch how many you’s you use. You can replace you with students or kids or children. Great job
Great job Devon! Your paragraph was very well written.
I love to play my computer. Computers are a lot of fun with the right games. I think it is so cool how much stuff a computer can do. I like to play games of of steam. Steam is a game store on the internet. Steam has over 1,000 games to play. My favorite game on steam is The Escapists. I could sit and play on my computer for hours on end. But eventually I go outside, Ugh! Computers are a lot of fun for me and you will love them to. All in all, my favorite thing to do is play computers.
You said the word of twice.
Why does it matter?
Why does Gmod matter J.P.?
Sorry, thought you ment my paragraph J.P.
You had a nice paragraph, but you used I and my to many times.
go Steam!!
Volleyball! Yell it from the top of ones lung! Join know! More than one knows that one can join! It is one game that is amazing and fun! One cannot only see it in anyone’s eyes but in their heart too. People don’t have to love the sport to be good but some people do! Someone knows that you are one of those people! You can do it anyone can. With a round ball that is a big fan. Do it know! Whoooooooo!
Lauren you should have used more sentences and longer sentences.
Nice but one thing. With the sentence that says with a round ball that is a big fan it is incomplete. Nice though😜😜😃
Basketball is an amazing sport! It’s a learning experience, it needs great teamwork, and it keeps you in great shape! I like to play basketball because it keeps you in shape, and it is suuuuuper fun at the same time! I played basketball for Monte Vista and it was really fun to be with my friends Sierra, Chely, Kalea, and Juliet! We had a lot of fun! Basketball gives you something to do when your bored. If you are ever bored at home, (which everybody is at least once on their life) ypu can just go to a park or if you have a basketball hoop at home, and shoot the basketball!!!So don’t be shy, try out for basketball next year, and have a blast with your friends! You won’t regret it!
Nice paragraph.
Thanks!
I totally argue its a great paragraph
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Thank you!
Hey Svea it’s Lauren the only thing I think I would change is that you seemed to use many person pronouns try to replace them with one, somebody, or basketball players.
Soccer is extremely awesome! Both practices and games are amazing and fun. Soccer players run and dribble the ball. Players pass in different formations with different techniques. Everyone who plays soccer plays it with their own style. Whether one is aggressive and outgoing or cunning and smart, they will have a lot of fun playing this awesome sport. Soccer is also great exercise. Some people may say that soccer is too physically draining. However, if one practices often, huffing, puffing, and walking around the field will be a thing of the past. Soccer players can join either recreational or competitive soccer. Recreational soccer is for new players, while competitive soccer is for more experienced players. Everyone should at least try out soccer, because it is definitely the best sport in the world.
Nice paragraph! I liked how you used soccer players instead of saying you. It helps readers get a better understanding!!!
Thanks!
Awesome. One mistake: Softball is the best not soccer.😜😜😃😃😜😜😃😃
Soccer is a great sport. People can get exercise and have fun. Soccer is a sport that everyone can play. Boys or girls both can have fun. In the competition leagues it is a lot of fun it watch. Doing soccer moves like the maradona or the rainbow is really fun to watch and try. When players conquer the move they have very good ball skills. Big or small anyone can play. Juggling the ball is really fun once players get the hang of it. Sometimes things in soccer take time. But players can go through it and be a great soccer player. Try soccer players will have a blast.
Soccer is a very fun sport to play. Players can exercise and still have fun. There are a lot of differing things people can do in soccer. Players can juggle the ball. Which takes a long time but will get the hand of it. Big or small kids and parents can play it. Boys and girls both have a blast playing together or separate. Soccer is really fun. Players don’t have to be strong to play the sport. The competition players are very good. Sometimes players can learn from them. Try soccer players will have a blast!
Good job Bethany, the only correction I have for you is instead of hand I think you ment hang of it. Overall, it was anice paragraph maybe I should try soccer.
Correction: to clean it up you should say, players can juggle the ball, which takes a long time, but you will get the hang of it instead of, Players can juggle the ball. Which takes a long time but will get the hand of it.
I think you meant different when you said “There are a lot of differing things people can do in soccer???
Soccer is an amazing sport. In fact, it is the most popular sport in the world! It is suitable for all people. Most people love it if they are strong and tough. If you are a forward, it is a great feeling to score goals. If you are a goalie, it is a thrill to save a good shot. You can play a variation of soccer with almost all items. People in poorer countries loved the game so much they used grapefruit as their ball. People kick and jump, dive and slide, even use their heads! Soccer is very exciting. Some skills people need to become good are dribbling, passing and shooting. All people should try soccer, because if they do, they’ll love it.
Good job. It isn’t poorer. It’s poor. Nice job.
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Drama is an amazing activity! Many people love drama because it is suitable for mostly anyone. You can do improv with friends or even family. There are many reasons why drama is fun! One reason is that you can do it anywhere at anytime. There are many types of drama, there are plays that you can do or just improv games that you can play. One fun part about drama is that you can do plays. There are many hard parts about plays but they are very fun. One part about drama that is fun is that you get to memorize lines for a play or production. Many peoples favorite part about drama is when the play or production happens. Many people should try drama because if they do they will love it!
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✌️ Your paragraph was amazing and I could find any corrections😃
Good job!!
Don’t you mean you couldn’t find mistakes?
Basketball is a great sport! Is is really fun and competitive. Team work is really key and it is fun to score. Basketball also gives people a good exercise. People can play as a point guard, shooting guard, forward, small forward, and center. The position I play is point guard. If people practice a lot they can become very good. Also it is fun to win. Players would need to learn how to dribble and shoot. It is also fun when playing with a friend. All in all everyone should play basketball because it is really fun.
My favorite activity is playing on a computer or tablet. People should try this activity for several reasons. Users can choose to watch videos, play games, or to even socialize with friends. First of all, computer users can watch videos on the Internet. Some parents might say that children can watch too many inappropriate videos. However, on some platforms like YouTube, parents can set filters that only allows their child to watch appropriate content. Also, users can choose to play games. Depending on whether the person is using a computer or a tablet, there are different options. Tablets have some games that regular computers don’t usually have (or that are available), but computers generally have the latest and greatest games available for playing. Finally, people using a computer or iPad can socialize with friends. If there are friends on opposite sides of the country that are waiting to be able to greet and converse, the Internet is a great option. Platforms like Skype and FaceTime are both great ways for people to socialize with the convenience of a click. These are all the reasons why playing on a computer or iPad is my favorite activity.
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Yeah, don’t be a jerk Derek.
My favorite activity is playing baseball. People have been playing it for a long time. It is a great way to make friends with people you don’t know. Some people think that it is boring and slow. However, that is not the case. Even when things aren’t happening, the player is thinking and planning the next play. It teaches you to accomplish things as a team. It is an outdoor sport, which is considered healthy. Some people think that it is a dangerous sport. However, you have a slim chance of getting hit and you have on a helmet to protect your head. When the baseball game is over you might have won the game or the season. If you didn’t there is always next game.
Contrary to popular belief, baseball is not a boring game by any means. Have you noticed that there are no cheer leaders in the game of baseball? Do you know why? It’s because this sport is physically, emotionally and psychologically exciting all at the same time. Whether you are a fan, a spectator, or a player, it is guaranteed that, in baseball, your mind is constantly occupied by the game. As a player, you will develop extraordinary skills in balance, agility, strength, speed, and a quick- thinking mind. Just as in any other sport, practice makes perfect. If you are a pitcher, with constant practice and conditioning, you will throw the perfect pitch almost every time. The sound of the umpire’s voice, echoing through your ears as he signals and says, “strrrrrrike!” is music to your team’s ears. Then, when it’s your turn to bat, it is the thrill of standing on the plate, ready to hit that ball. “Bam!” You hit a home run! The crowd roars, and your team runs out to congratulate you. Adrenaline rush! It is the greatest feeling ever! Wouldn’t you want to partake in this awesome sport? Oh yes, you do! So, “Swing batter batter batter swing!”
I really liked you paragraph 😝😃
I think Hannah meant your paragraph not you paragraph.
Nice! That is really good.
Babysitting can be really fun and it can also give teens some extra cash. If given the opportunity to babysit it should be an easy decision. Babysitting is fun because there is a lot time to interact with the children. Playing with children is fun and make a person feel young again. It can be rewarding to teach a child something new. Plus children are not picky, they are easy to please and entertain. Little kids love to be told story and play make-believe games. Also cooking for kids is easy. Usually kids will just want something easy like Mac & cheese, a sandwich, cereal, or fruit. After the children eat they probably would want to go outside and play games. They games they play or not that hard so anybody any age can play. That’s why babysitting is so much fun.
Great job! I really liked it though, when you said they games they, I’m pretty sure it was supposed to be the*
Great job!
Great paragraph! Sounds to me like your really good with kids! 😉😊
(1)Say “cheese”! (2)Have you ever tried photography? (3) It’s a mind and body stimulating activity. (4) It helps people see the small details in nature and city life. (5) You may not have a fancy $400 camera, but all you need could just be a phone! (6) When the most pretty or immaculate picture comes out, you will forever see its beauty. (7) Photography helps people relax and realize just how amazing some parts of the world are. (8) If you haven’t tried photography, you should. (9) It wouldn’t hurt to take some time to notice the world. (10) Can you see how photography is the best? (11) You should really try it! (12) In conclusion, people should try photography.
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Awesome paragraph Clarece!!
Softball
As you may know, softball started due to World War 1. As the men went away to the battle fields, there were no men to play baseball. Until, the women were involved. For one hundred and one years, softball has been loved by millions of people. By the end of this, you too will love softball. Softball is about the same as baseball. Although, there are a few obvious differences. The softball is about 1-2 inches bigger than the baseball. In order to pitch the ball, you must throw the ball underhand while in baseball, it is overhand. Most people say that softball is easy, to soft to play. But, that is not true. If you have ever noticed, the boys have beautiful grass on their fields while we have gravel, and some fields even have gopher holes. But the boys have their game real easy. As the batter hits a ground ball, it will roll through the grass and slow down for them to easily pick it up. We have gravel, chewed up rocks, and dirt. We are the ones who have the challenge because as the ball is rolling, it does not slow down until it reaches the out field, or stops into your mitt, as well as dealing with bad hops. And for the that reason, that is what makes the game exciting, and a jaw dropping sport. Not only being with your friends, but having the adrenalin while your diving for the ball, or running and scoring the wining point for your team. These a a few of the reasons why softball is one of my favorite outdoor activities, that I will never stop loving. I hope to see you on the field.
Love the history👍
Great job Hannah! Next time use too instead of to soft. Add a comma before but.
According to http://travelblog.viator.com horseback riding is the twenty-second best in the top 25 Adventure Activities: 2015 Viator Travel Awards. From the moment you mount the horse to the moment you get off the horse all you are focusing on is the horse, yourself, the other people around you, and the things around you. Some may say riding horses lets their mind go free, and some may say when they are riding a horse they feel like nothing can get their way. Some parents may say that riding horses takes a lot of money just for their kid to have a horse. It does, but they should put their put their kids a week long summer camp and if they love it and can’t stop talking about it you should probably sign them up for lessons that the horses are provided. Horsemanship is fun for all ages. Horses are fun to be with they are even fun to draw. Horsemanship is also fun, because the majority of sports don’t have animals, but horsemanship does. Horses always seems to turn the bad days to good ones. Some people say horses help them relax. Horsemanship is fun whether you are jump a big jump or your petting a horse. Horsemanship is really fun, and more people should try it.
So true.
I love that you out the website as backup for your info.👍👍
Baseball is the best sport there could be. I takes teamwork and focus to play ball. When you are up at the plate ready to bat the ball, the sound of your teammates give you confidence. You have to hit that ball hard. Make it sail. On base, catching the ball is vital. Felling of the great expierience getting someone out is awsome. Pitching is a place if you can through hard and control the ball. If you pitch good on the mound, your the boss of the plate and the field. It’s one of the best fellings there are. If not, then if your good at catching, there is also a place for you. Out field or catcher. Out field is more running and pop flys. Catching is if you can watch out for the bat and catch the pitch. Anything can happen at any position.
That was great Daniel, but you spelt feeling felling twice. And that sentence with feling should have the at the beginning of the sentence. But anyway good job I liked it.⚾️⚾️👏👏😎
Your paragraph was nice, but there were a couple errors on one of your sentences. The Feeling of the great expierience of getting someone out is awesome is how it should be.
Basketball! Even the name is awesome! Basketball is a entertgetic and amazing sport. You can shoot basketballs inside and outside. One should play basketball because it’s a fun way to get excersize and it’s also a fun sport in general. Some people may say that getting hit with a basketball hurts but really it doesn’t. It’s a safe game for anyone because it involves running, which isn’t dangerous, and throwing a basketball in a hoop, which isn’t dangerous at all. Another reason why one should play basketball is bacause most sports need 2 or more people but basketball you can play by yourself. So if one is ever by themselves pick up a basketball and start shooting. Every sport is fun but basketball seems to be a very popular sport. Remeber next time whenever your bored pick up a basketball and start shooting! I encourage people to play basketball, you won’t regret it!
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Here is a fun fact about horsemen ship, it’s called horsemen ship but there’s not a lot of men/boys in the program. Horsemen ship is a fun sport to do. The horses at MVCS are so sweet and gentle and are so fun to ride. Once you get on the horse you don’t even feel the cooled. Once you get off you’ll just want to get back on. As soon as you touch a horse you instantly fall in love with that horse. Some may say horses are a lot of money but aMVCS lessons are not. Riding a horses is a good way to release stress. Horses are amazing creatures. They understand what you want once kids start riding them. Horses help kids stay busy and active. Horses are great creatures and more people should ride them more often.
I think Horsemanship is one word.
Also men started to ride way before girls did.
Skiing is a great activity recommended by many sports fans. Sliding down extremely high mountains and feeling the refreshing cold air rubbing your face feels the best. At the top of the mountains you can feel like the king/queen of the freezing cold lands. Sliding down the mountains can let out steam and can be the funniest thing people had ever done. Of course if people don’t love racing like sonic the hedge hog they can still slow down. Skiing is a sport that is loved by many extreme sports type of people.
Playing the piano is something everyone should learn to do. In the beginning, it can be hard to learn the piano. Having patience and practicing are the keys to getting better at playing the piano. Many studies have shown that people who play music, especially the piano, tend to do better in school. Also, students that play the piano exhibit more self discipline than those that don’t. Studies have also shown that young children that learn music do better in math. Playing the piano is fun and rewarding because there are so many different songs that can be learned. Different song types include classical, jazz, and movie themes like Star Wars. There is never an excuse to be bored when a piano is near. Another great thing about playing the piano is being able to entertain people at family gatherings. Many people love to hear Christmas songs during Christmas time. Playing the piano is a skill that lasts a lifetime.
Water Polo is one of the most unique and diverse sports there is. It is very complicated and requires practice. It is a fun challenge that not everyone can complete. Most soccer and basketball players enjoy water polo because this sport is just like soccer and basketball but instead of having a field to run on, you have a pool to swim in! In other sports you get extremely hot, you don’t have to worry about that because you’re in water! You have to swim and throw water polo balls at the same time. It is tough and extreme to the body, so to say you’ve played water polo is an accomplishment. Water Polo is not a common sport although it should be. It is an olympic sport. It is a fun challenge to tread water while passing a ball around. If you look for a different challenge in water polo, play as goalie. Goalie is fun because you have to leap out of the water to block shots on the goal. In conclusion, Water Polo is a fun, but challenging sport.
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The beat, and when it comes up…two point and then over. That’s why horseback ridding is the best. There’s no tension between two people, there is only the friendship and trust between the ridder and the horse. Boggie is my horse, he is shared, but he listens and oppas me best (next to Cassy that is). That is the friend ship. The trust is knowing that the horse will not spook and make it over the jump. The beat is the sound of your horse. The beat is the motion and diagonal that he/she is on, but that’s only half the other is you. That is why horsemanship and horseback ridding is the best, and if people have something against that then those people are missing out.
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I have many hobbies that I enjoy, one of them is making different kinds of food such as pastries or meals. I really enjoy cooking because when I give it to people and they like the food, it makes me feel good about myself. Some people even sell their desserts or food at the farmers market on Sundays or right outside their house to make a little extra money. One time I sold my pastries at a local event and they were all sold out. All the money I gained was donated to my relative who has breast cancer. I enjoy making pastries more than meals because it’s easier and more fun. One of my favorite things to make is rice crispy treats it’s really simple actually. Anyone can make them and they’ll turn out wonderful! I made the rice crispy treats last year for the Fourth of July and my little cousin asked me to make them for his birthday. I encourage baking because it’s very productive and you have lots of fun. It will be even more fun if you do it with your friend and then you can have a baking party or something like that. Everyone should try baking, even if you’re not the best at it.
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You can see as far as the eye can see. When you’re at the top of a tree. Climbing a tree is the best way to explore. All of the kids in America should climb trees. Climbing trees outstanding and awesome to do when one is bored. When kids climb tree they are having the most fun in a long time. Don’t get me wrong adults can climb trees to. When one is at the climbing a tree they are climbing and looking at all God has made.
I posted this before I was done. Please see my second post below.
Horseback riding is the best because there’s no rush, no one, wins or loses. It’s a sport where everyone who enjoys it can have trust with their horse and friendship with their horses. Koda is my horse I ride him often that’s where friendship and trust come to play. I love my horse because I know I can trust him and because animals are great friends. Thats only a part of what makes a great team. Teamwork only happens if a horse understands the rider and makes each other a great team. That’s why horsemanship is the best. And if anyone hasn’t tried I would recommend it. Also horsemanship isn’t for everyone but no one will never know until someone trys.
Love the paragraph bri!😃 You don’t need any corrections it’s perfect!
You can see as far as the eye can see. When you’re at the top of a tree, the view is amazing. Climbing a tree is the best way to explore. All of the kids in America should climb trees. Climbing trees is outstanding and awesome to do when one is bored. When kids climb a tree they are having the most fun in a long time. Don’t get me wrong adults can climb trees too. When one is climbing a tree they are reaching and looking in new ways. It is cool when one get to the top one will feel proud of themselves. Special places in trees can be turned in to cool forts. Listening to the birds in the trees is calming. when one is at the climbing a tree they are climbing and looking at all God has made. This is why I like to climb trees!
Nice paragraph. But next time put a comma after don’t get me wrong. And the sentences hen one is at the climbing a tree.
Writing! A fun activity to do when you are inspired! Writing can help with future writing assignments in school or simply be entertaining to the author. In writing one can express their feelings in as many powers or books as they want! It doesn’t matter whether someone reads everything an author writes down. Sometimes writings can help with overwhelming feelings. Take anger, for example, if the author is in an angry mood and needs to let their emotions out, writing can help them do that. Many people wrote award-winning poems and short stories about anger and other emotions that were just crying to be let out. It feels relaxing in a way. Writing can also help with school. It can help by having one experiment with different adjectives and verbs to express different ideas. It can help with essays, poems and stories. All in all writing is a fun activity and that everyone should try it.
Soccer is an awesome sport to play. Soccer is a good sport to play because it’s always active, teaches players how to work as a team, and there is a lot of different positions to play. First of all soccer is always active. Since the ball usually never stops moving, and the goal of the game is to get the ball and score, it keeps the players in shape. Players end up jogging, running, and sprinting. Some sports can be boring but soccer is always fast, active, and is never boring. Second of all, soccer is a team sport, so the players use teamwork to win. They learn how to work together as a team instead of individuals. When the players work together as a team they almost always make friends with their teammates. Lastly, they get to play different positions. When they get to play different positions, it makes it interesting because it teaches them the responsibilities of each position. When they play different positions it improves their skill and knowledge on how the whole team needs to work together, to be successful at soccer. Finally, people should give soccer a try because it’s always active, uses teamwork, and it has different positions to play.
Art is fan and relaxing. Some people say not everyone can do art but everyone can! Art is a good way to relax and to think. People will say “I’m not good at art.” But you are, art is a big three letter word there are so many different types of A-R-T. And one of the best things about it is you can’t mess up, it’s just something you did not know about. And it’s challenging sometimes. And when you are done you get this happy feeling also you have something to hang up. And art is not just something pretty it’s history form all over the world. Now go find a pen and paper and have fun!
Soccer is a great sport to play. The goal in soccer is to get the ball into the net without touching the ball with your hands, only your feet. The rules are very easy to understand. The only thing you really need are a few cones and a ball. Each team plays with 11 players on the field, each player has a specific duty. Soccer may just be the only professional team sport where physical size matters the least. Basically you’re sprinting up and down a field for about 90 minutes. Athleticism and fitness are really important in this sport. Soccer players train for many weeks for their games and they do a lot of exercises to stay fit. Stature and physical strength are not really important; skill and speed are more useful. It is the sport most consistently played around the world. I think that everyone should at least play a little match with their friends or family. Soccer is one of my favorite activities.
Tennis is an amazing sport. Tennis is not a very popular sport, but it is truly awesome. Tennis is a great way to get out of the house and have fun. People of all ages can play tennis with friends and family. It’s a great way to have some fun in the sun. People can play tennis many ways one against one or two against two, which is called singles and doubles. People don’t need a net to play tennis it’s easy for people to play it against any wall. Tennis can be played indoors and outdoors. It doesn’t matter what skill level people are at tennis it is always fun. Tennis is a great sport to play in any weather.
Figure skating is a fun and exciting sport. Some people may say that figure skating requires too much work. However, skating, even though it does require much time and energy, feels amazing once you’re flying across the ice. There are several categories of figure skating, that are all extremely fun to participate in. The categories are pair skating, single skating, ice dancing, and synchronized skating. Pair skating is a category where a man and a woman skate and perform routines together in competitions. Single skating is a category where a single person competes by them selves against other skaters. Ice dancing is much like pair skating, because, like pair skating, a man and a woman skate and perform routines together in competitions. The difference between pair skating and ice dancing is in ice dancing spins must be as a team in a dance hold, and skaters are disallowed to do throws and jumps. Synchronized skating is a category where a large group of figure skaters skate together in sync. Even though I am a single skater, I think all of these categories are fun to try. Figure skating is a fun sport that is worth a try!
Skateboarding is so fun! You get ride around and go places. It is also fun because you can learn how to Ollie and kick flip. There is so many different types of tricks that make skateboarding fun. You can ride your skate board to the park or your best friends house. It takes a long time to get the tricks down but when you finally get it right it is so fun to do over and over again and put it in more tricks that you learn. Skateboarding is fun and exciting. It takes a lot of tries to get really hard tricks but the more you practice the better you get. It feels so good when you finally nail the trick perfectly. There is more to skateboarding on a flat surface there is also ramp skating. In ramp skating you get to drop in and do more tricks. Skate boarding is super fun.
There “are” so many different types of tricks. Not “is”.
Painting is my favorite thing to do in my spare time. Painting is very relaxing. It also can help people express their inner feelings. Some doctors may say if you paint for a long time you could get arthritis or much worse. If you only paint once In a while, you can not get injured. You can paint many different things and their are many different ways to paint. There’s watercolor, acrylic, pastels, oils, and many more. Painting is very colorful and creative. You can be running, walking, jumping, and many more actions in paintings. If someone is sad they could paint a sad picture, such as a person crying. If someone is happy they could paint a picture of flowers in the sun. Painting is a very fun yet helpful hobby, it helps you be yourself in many ways and colors.
Drama is pretty fun. The first ever play I was in was when I was 4 years old. I have been in 8 other plays. Some of them include Les Misarbles and Aladin. It’s countless how many different performances I’ve gone and seen. I have seen community theater all the way up to professional. A recent show I saw was in San Francisco called Kinky Boots. I didn’t really like it but the music was really cool. I really fun part about Drama is that if you get up to professional level you can get paid a lot of money. If you don’t want to act you can direct or something like that. Something that I’m looking forward to is going to a camp in L.A with Kalea. You should try drama👌
Great paragraph
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Great paragraph! One correction I would make is that you put ” I ” a lot. Overall very good paragraph!
Basketball is an amazing sport that everyone should try. In basketball, there is always a thrill is so exciting. Basketball is even better when playing with friends.Warming up during practice or even a game is always fun. Though it stinks to lose it just makes winning even better. There are many basketball games such as knock out and poison. Basketball is for all ages and genders so go and try it. During a game every player has to play at least two quarters so no matter what you get to play. It can be a tiring sport but at least it can you in shape. My team always has fun together and yours can too.
Skiing is the best winter sport ever! The snow is really fun to be in and it is the only sport where a person can go really fast on two feet. In skiing people do all sorts of things like skiing through the trees, going off jumps, and skiing really steep terrain. Crazier people might do helicopter skiing or hike into steep mountains. There are even some people who parachute from airplanes to find fresh power.
Beginner skiers might think skiing is a hard sport because a person’s feet are strapped into these long, straight and thin sled like things. But once a person gets the hang of it – skiing is super fun! The better a person gets the more they can do. The higher a person goes on the mountain the more fun skiing gets. When you go higher you have more ski runs to choose from.
Watching the winter Olympics is a great way to get inspired to try out skiing. There are two main types a person can choose from. There is down hill skiing and Cross Country skiing. Both types are extremely fun to do, so get out there and try skiing.
Nice paragraphs!
Football is a great sport. The point of the game is to score touchdowns and make field goals. There is and offense and defense. The deffense trys to get the ball and stop the offense from scoring. The offense is trying to get pass the deffense and score. A touchdown is 6 points, if you make the field goal it is an extra points. You have lots of pads on because you are takleing other players.
Basketball is an exciting sport! Almost everyone I know plays this sport. This is a fun sport to play in your front or backyard. People can relax their minds while shooting hoops. If people don’t have a basketball hoop they can practice on some tricks and on their dribbling. People can also play with their siblings. If people practice they can play a game against their brother/sister and might win. Nothing smells better than victory! Overall basketball is a fun sport to play alone or with someone. I encourage people to play this sport and have fun doing it.
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Baseball is an amazing and fun sport. Players can play with a lot of different people. There are nine different positions on the field they are: Pitcher, Catcher First Base, Second Base, Short Stop, Third Base, Right Field, Center Field, and Left Field. Players throw the ball around and hope to get someone out. Players also hit with a bat, and when they hit the ball they run and try to get to first before they get out. It is a rush when players run and sprint around the bases because, they know they can get out at anytime. When players catch a ball in the outfield they feel good, and everyone cheers. also when players field a grounder they need to think quick to get someone out.
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Art is something that people use to express themselves. People make art to show other people their true self. Art can be made in many different ways: watercolor, painting, drawing and sketches and many more. People enjoy creating art because they get to create something true to themselves. Most artists say that they paint because they want to express themselves, record a time or place that they enjoyed or to just tell stories about something. Some famous artists are: Pablo Picasso, Vincent Van Gogh, Leonardo de Vinci and M.C. Escher. Everyone can be an artist because everyone has true feelings inside that they need to explore and show others. Art is something everyone can enjoy if they try. Many times, artists paint feelings. If the artist is sad, they will paint soemthing corresponding with being sad. If the artist is happy, they will paint soemthing corresponding with them being happy. Art is amazing, creative and most of all, inspiring.
Hiking is a very fun thing to do. It is a good way to exercise and have fun at the same time. It is a good workout because you have to push beyond the limit. It takes practice but eventually you can make it to the top of the mountain/hill. You can have a lot of fun by looking at the scenery of where you are hiking. The mountains are beautiful. Many people are shocked when they first look at the mountain because they are so pretty. The mountains can also be very inspirational which can make you think of more beautiful places to hike. Mount Yosemite is a vey beautiful and one of the best places to hike. There are so many more places to hike than just Mount Yosemite. Hiking can help your balance a lot. Hiking also gives your lugs a workout because you are at a higher elevation.
Attention!!… At-ease Scouts! Boy Scouts is awesome. Boy Scouts is a good thing to do because you can do so many different activities. Boy Scouts go on field trips, where they hike, swim, climb trees, cook good food, make large fires, and put up their own tents. Boy Scouts participate in holiday parades like at Christmas and the Fourth of July. Last year, my troop (Troop 633), won the award for the best float in the Aptos Fourth of July parade. It was so cool! This year Troop 633 also slept the night on a submarine (the USS Pomponito) and next year we go to Hawaii!! Boy Scouts help in their communities. When you are a Boy Scout you get to do flags on federal holidays. The Scouts put up flags to honor veterans at local cemeteries and afterwards we have a huge, delicious barbecue at the Veterans of Foreign Wars (VFW). Scouts is a great way to make friends. You should try it. Scouts is a lot of fun
Horseback riding is the most fun thing to do. It can be exciting and adventurous. It is also great way to get exercise. Horseback riders get to spend time with animals. Riders also get to make a bond with a horse. First, people get exercise by moving there legs and arms. They also get exercise by using muscles to balance. Second, people get to spend time with animals by riding horses and taking care of horses. Last, when someone gets love and care for a horse, it makes a bond between the person and the horse. A bond between a person and an animal is special. This is why horse back riding is a great hobby.
You are so right, and once you fall in love with an horse there is no way to describe it
Baseball is the best sport. Baseball doesn’t require a lot of players. There only needs to be nine players at the most. Baseball can be challenging but the coaches teach you how to play. Like for batting, they teach you how to hit and swing at the ball. Once people learn how tho play the game it is fun and exiting. Baseball can get very competitive especially in the bigger leagues. Since baseball has many leagues, you can play for a long period in your life. With all the nine positions, you don’t have to only play one position your whole career. If your an out fielder and your fast you could probably play shortstop. Baseball is not very dangerous. You could get hit by the ball but you can dodge it. All in all baseball is the best sport.
I beg to differ
It was grate and all but make sure not to use you
Baseball is not the best sport but nice paragraph no corrections😠😂👊👌👏💪
How do people get on TV? Actors must have started their training from somewhere. Most likely they took a drama class just like mine at Monte Vista Christian School. You should take a drama class for 3 reasons. First, if you take drama you can act and sing on the stage. Secondly, drama is really fun because
you get to pretend to be someone you are not. If you become a good actor you can be on TV or on a Broadway Show. If you become lucky enough you can become famous and travel around the world. It is an awesome thing to do which would bring a lot of joy and fun to the actor. Once you’re on that stage everybody is looking at you all the pressure is on you. No matter what you do they will still love what you do. When the actor is done performing people will bring the actor flowers or possibly an award for their achievements. That is why drama in my opinion is the best thing to take in your whole life.
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Video games are so fun. They are fun for everyone no matter what age. There are many kinds of games to play. Some examples are sports games, race games and card games. Multiple people can play video games. That includes friends and family that live across town. Part of the fun is to try to get good at a game and then beat the game. Some people even like doing videos about the games people play. They can get very popular on YouTube. Another good thing about video games is that people can play video games anytime of the day. So people sometimes play when they cannot sleep. People should try video games out, I’ll bet they’ll be stoaked.
Correction: Video games are so fun. They are fun for everyone no matter what age. There are many kinds of games to play. Some examples are sports games, racing games, and card games. Multiple people can play video games at the same time. That includes friends and family that live across town. Part of the fun is to try to get good at a game and then beat it. Some people even like doing videos about the games people play. They can get very popular on YouTube. Another good thing about video games is that people can play video games anytime of the day. So people sometimes play video games when they cannot sleep. People should try video games out, I’ll bet they’ll be stoaked.
Go and climb a tree
Go climb a tree then too.
Equestrian. 1) Equestrian is most exciting. 2) horseback riding is a great sport to learn. 3) The history of horseback riding came about around 4200bc. 4) People may say boys don’t normally ride horses, then who would be doing all the horse races, who started it all. MEN! 5)It’s not for most people but when with a horse it feels like a dream where people can escape reality. 6) it takes concentration, strength, and control. 7) To ride a horse is one thing but to bond with it is another. 8) Equestrian takes a lot of work, it’s not just like any other sport. 9) Pretend the horse is your pet, clean it, feed it, take care of it, basically bonding with the horse. 10) The horse would recognize the person and understand how to work with you. 11) horsemanship is a sport that takes time and practice but in the end it’s worth all the dedication. 12) Equestrian is probably one of the best sports because it involves an animal, a good workout, different tricks, and it’s beautiful to watch.
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What an amazing paragraph!😉
Tired of searching for an activity to do? Play Soccer! Soccer is awesome and exciting. Soccer helps players learn to communicate and collaborate. Soccer is more exciting than baseball. There is a lot more action in soccer compared to baseball. In baseball, the pitcher throws the ball and if it isn’t hit, players have wait for the catcher to throw the ball. In soccer, players don’t have to wait for the ball to be thrown and caught. There is constant movement everywhere on the field. Also, in baseball, players have limited time to be on offense because players only have three strikes before they are out. Players are lucky to receive 7 pitches. If players are out, players have to wait for the whole line up before it is their turn again to bat. In soccer, players are always playing and they can change from offense to defense in a blink of an eye.
In Soccer, there are many positions to play and each position has its own job so players learn to communicate and work with each other. If someone likes to play offense, play soccer and be a forward. If someone likes to play block shots, play soccer and be a goalie. If someone likes to run and bump other players, play soccer and be a mid-fielder. If someone likes to help defend, play soccer and be a defender. In soccer, players still have to communicate with their team mates.
Start playing soccer now!
Great job! Good point on baseball.
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Animals feel the same as humans do. Many people use animals as accessories, or reasons to show off. Having a pet is a responciblity that many people don’t understand! Many of those people would rather be on a video game, or at the mall than to be outside in nature. What those people dont understand is that, everytime you are with a pet you have a chance to bond with a real living being! No matter what, a pet will always be there for their masters. Though it may seem hard to believe, there is always going to be animals. Exceptionally since humans are animals too. So really, even though many people think humans are the higher species we are all equals.
I know right
Video games are a lot fo fun. Video games can be fun for everyone who plays them old or young. There are tons and tons of video games in the world for people to play. There’s action games, adventure games, simulator games, strategy games and even learning games. There are also game where you can play with other people around the world or in your country. Some people say you can’t bond with others while playing video games, but you can buy a voice chat headset. In some games you can create your own world. Some games even teach you how to do things like hunting. Some games you can prank your friends with like The Scary Maze game. Video games are very fun. I think everyone should try playing one.
I think you meant of, not “fo”.
Basketball is my favorite activity. It is great sport for anyone to play. The rules are simple, but it takes basketball players along time to master them. The more basketball players practice the better they come. The only problem is if a basketball player trainers them self the wrong way it is hard to switch their habits. Many people don’t know, but basketball is fourth most popular sports in the world and third most popular sport in the United States of America. Other countries can play differently than each other. For example in Australian basket ball you can’t dibble or walk with the ball, you can only pass. In Asian basketball it moves a lot slower since there is no time limit with the ball. Mostly people play for money such as the ACC, PAC Ten, Big East, and NBA. Other people play to be the best like Street Basketball and King of The Court. But the reason that most people play enjoy basketball is to have fun!
Making crafts is so fun! Crafting is a great activity to take part in because it is a great way to show your creativity. It’s really easy and fun anyone can take part in it. Some crafts are more challenging but if you keep working at it your piece will end up looking amazing. A craft can be anything from a wallet made of blue and green duct tape to a valentines day card made from construction paper and glue. No matter what one makes they can always have a good time. Crafting takes creativity and a sense of imagination. Now many people may rely on the instructions but just know not to be afraid to change it up and put your own twist on whatever your making. You never know you may find out something new. When crafting you can experiment with new and exciting materials and ideas. Isn’t that great? So what are you waiting for grab some glitter glue and get started!
Legend of Zelda is the best! Legend of Zelda provides the skills to finish puzzles. Those skills help your brain develop. Zelda also has the comforting of a amazing adventre video game feeling. Legend of Zelda is a video game and fun and smart puzzles. Video games are known for “mushing your brains” whitch might be bad. Although this game can help you figure out puzzles and might mush your brain.
Josh, your post was great, however, you spelled adventure wrong. You also said it can help figure out puzzles and it might mush your brain instead of it might help you figure out puzzles but it might mush your brain
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Art is amazing. It is so much fun. Art is amazing because it feels like your hand has a mind of it own. When you start drawing a picture pops in your head and your hand takes off. Art makes you feel like you can create a masterpiece. When you do art it makes you feel like you are were you are creating. Art can help the person calm down and relax. Over all art is a fascinating the that has been going on for years. Everybody can do art if you believe you can. Go out in the world and create your masterpiece.
Great job but you should try to use less yous and personnel pronouns for example, you can use: people, students, children, humans. Check sentence eight. You will find some errors in that sentence.
I love running. Running is really fun. Sometimes I run outside. It is nice to be able to run free outside, in the sun. Some people can’t run because they have disabilities. Some of us can. Use your gift. If you don’t, you might as well not have it. If you like to get active, running is the thing for you. It’s amazing you can run all day. You can run anywhere. Except the ocean. Try it.
My favorite activity is soccer because people get to be goalies, defenders, midfielders, and forward. All of those positions one can not use their hands but only the goalie can. Soccer makes people’s minds work to find the ball and makes people’s body’s work to get the ball. Many people make a living of playing soccer. If u are very good at soccer one may become a professional player and many teams may want them to be on their team. At some soccer games for professionals each person that goes makes a soccer player get more money. Many people make a living off of soccer because it pays very well if you are a professional.
Skateboarding is so fun! It helps kids get outside to hang out with friends. (But done skate inside). Other then being on electronics all day. Skateboarding has been around for a while. They have now made skateparks so that kids can go and skate over there while having fun! Just go out and skate for a while and you’ll get the hang of it! If you’re still haveing trouble, then sign up for a coach. In about a week you’ll be a normal skater in no time! You can also ask a friend to teach you. Hey it doesn’t cost money. But don’t go diving and and try some tricks. First ride around with it until you feel comfortable to try some tricks. Go on, give it a shot!
Hey Jackson good job. I thing you meant don’t not done inside. Also, instead of other then, I think you should put rather then. Finally, try not to start a sentence with but. Overall, great job.
Flag Football is a fun and exiting sport for all gender and ages. There is no contact and it is a safe activity for kids and adults. There are minor requirements, all you need is a flag belt, athletic shorts, cleats and a mouth guard. There are many leagues in California and I bet there eave none near you. Flag Football does not require a certain skill set. If you don’t want to join a league you can just gets some friends and start a game. Any size field will work, http://flagflagfootball.com is a great website to learn all the rules of this awsome sport.
Diving in my prospective is totally amazing. First, diving is the best thing other than going to the aquarium. Diving is when you can get up close and personal with all sorts of sea life depending on what seas you diving in. Sure a big tank on your back is heavy but when your in the water it is light as a feather. Next, diving might take a lot of work you know with the studying and exams but it really isn’t that bad because if you were to go on a dive with know knowledge, it’s basically committing suicide. Last, diving is a great experience in general. It is a way to just have fun under water without going up and down to take a breaths. So clearly, diving is better than any other underwater stuff like snorkeling.
Warhammer 40,000 and all modelling/model board games are great. They allow people to express their creativity. Some allow people to paint the models any way you want while others allow you to put the pieces together any way builders want. Some allow people to do both. Warhammer 40,000 is a great game with excellent characters and an excellent story. All of the characters are well thought out and they look awesome. Warhammer 40,000 is a modelling game where players put the characters together and paint them and BOOM! You’ve got your army. There are about seven armies to choose from and they are all epic. When someone finishes their army, then the fun starts. Players battle each other for dominance of the battlefield. People can do this anywhere they have a flat surface and a light. Personally, I really enjoy it. Everyone should try model making at least once.
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Football is the best sport. I love football because it allows people to do everything. Running, catching and throwing. It can also help you lose weight. It can get you out of the house and doing something for you’re health. You also have to have good body structure. There can be some negatives about football. One is that, it can be dangerous at times. You could get pounded like a pancake. I would say to that is, wear all of the equipment or if you fell uncomfortable play flag football
Really loved it! I just might play football!
Hunting is a great sport. It all started when I was just a little kid. I was about five. My moms side of the family are hunters and one of my uncles loved to hunt and he walked in the house with a hog. I was so amazed and I wanted to help so bad but he reapplied with, “you can wipe the blood of the truck outside.” But I will stop there hunting is a great sport besides wiping blood off a dirty discussing truck. But when you go hunting you get to see butiful sites and you get to carry around a big gun and that pretty cool and you get chewy jucy meat. People should hunt because it is a great sport.
Soccer is the best! You get to play games and you even get to play games and go against different teams that you never have heard about. Another great thing about soccer is that you get play with friends and people girls/boys you have never played with. Soccer is way better than softball, swimming, and way more things. When you play soccer people have the time to run around but if they play softball and all the others they don’t let people play different positions and different things on the field. Another thing is that some of the other sports are so boring that you might not even want to go anymore. Soccer is really fun to watch. When people go to soccer games they will will be all into the game! Soccer is the sport that everyone will want to play if they just watch a game! Finally soccer is a sport that everyone will want to play! When you play soccer for the first time don’t worry about getting hurt you will be fine. Now that I told you that soccer is the best thing in the world.
My favorite activity is theatre. I do theatre at All About Theatre, also known as AAT in Santa Cruz. AAT is a great place were all ages can participate and, or watch theatre. In the beginning when you sign up there is a month or less audition so the actor will know what part you will get in the Musical. Once the actor has gotten there part they will practice for about a month to four months with the other actor in the play. There is also other places you can do theatre. Like school and other places in your community. There is theatre everywhere nomatter where you live. Overall, theatre is a really good activity to do.
Soccer is a super great and fun sport. Soccer is a great sport to learn responsibility, strategy, perserverance, and teamwork. The responsibility I plays a huge role. A soccer players team must be able to count on their teammate to show up to practice and games. Strategy is also important because a player must know when to pass, dribble, or shoot. Perserverance might be the most important. A soccer player can never give up even if they are tired, hurt, or just down a goal. They must persevere. Lastly is teamwork. Teamwork is a hard skill to learn. People must learn to trust their teammates and know their strengths and weaknesses. Soccer is a great sport to learn life skills, and it is fun too!
Skiing is a fun sport. Skiing is very athletic. Skiing is exciting because people can go down the mountain as slow or fast as they want. The sport helps adults and kids bond and enjoy family time. Skiers are able to travel to all over the world for amazing skiing. Skiing allows leg muscles get stronger. In addtion, skiing is a good sport to do.
Horses are fun to jump and ride! Some may even say it is amazing and incredible. It can be a total stress reliever and even take ones mind of of something important coming up. I thing horsemanship is something lots of people love and you will too!
Running around on a dirt field with a paintball gun shooting my friends with little tiny paintballs is my favorite way of spending my free time. Paintball is the best game to play with friends and family. The excitement of having help from your teammates while attacking the enemy team is just awesome! During a day of paintball, a person needs gear in order to play. The gear includes a mask, padding, a gun, paintballs, and some old clothes (that way nicer clothes don’t get dirty). In a game, the referee will take votes from people for game modes. The most common mode is team deathmatch. This mode is a team versus team game where you only have one life. This means that if you get shot once, you’re out. Once the game starts, everyone is running for their lives! When they run, they start getting exercise. That way they don’t have to go to the gym! When the game ends, everyone leaves and goes home or stays and starts playing another game. In conclusion, paintball is great game to play on your free time.